“…One may argue that the SCSSM withdrawal date determined by National Climate Center (2016) is somewhat subjective (e.g., "steadily" transition and the large-scale circulation pattern), and it may be more reasonable to objectively determine the monsoon withdrawal by some criteria (e.g., Lam et al, 2005;Zhang et al, 2014;Luo and Lin, 2017). By considering the same two monsoonal parameters (but the threshold for potential pseudo-equivalent temperature is set to 335 K; Martin et al, 2019), Zhang et al (2014) quantitatively defined the steadily state as (a) the state is maintained for two pentads and is then interrupted for one pentad but immediately returns to the state before interruption, or (b) the state is maintained at least for three pentads and can be interrupted for no more than two pentads thereafter. Most of the SCSSM withdrawal pentad determined by National Climate Center (2016) and Zhang et al (2014) are the same, and their correlation is as high as 0.74 during 1951-2102, which is significant at the 99.9% confidence level according to the two-tailed Student's t test (Hu et al, 2018b).…”