“…For example, not only summer insolation and GHG forcing (Table 4), but also ice-albedo feedbacks, vegetation-albedo feedbacks, dust deposition on snow/ice, sea-ice expansion, and sea surface temperature reduction need to be considered (e.g., Oglesby, 1990;Calov et al, 2009;Colleoni et al, 2011;Abe-Ouchi et al, 2013;Liakka et al, 2016). Moreover, ice-sheet accumulation may not be related directly to the commonly used summer insolation at specific latitudes, but may also be affected (more) by insolation in other seasons, particularly spring (Colleoni et al, 2011;Jakobsson et al, 2014a). Ice-sheet nucleation may, in addition, depend on chaotic aspects of the weather/climate system; for example, successive winters with heavy snowfall may e almost randomly e cause some locations to receive an initial snow cover with enough volume and albedo feedback to ensure its survival and subsequent growth potential (e.g., Oglesby, 1990).…”