“…The main result of [13] is that (3) #{(x, y) ∈ F 2 q : x, x + P 1 (y), x + P 2 (y) ∈ A} = |A| 3 q + O P 1 ,P 2 (|A| 3/2 q 7/16 ) for any A ⊂ F q whenever the characteristic of F q is sufficiently large, so that r P 1 ,P 2 (F q ) ≪ P 1 ,P 2 q 1−1/24 . Note that the exponent of q in the error term of (3) is larger than in (2), so that the argument in [13] does not quantitatively recover the result in [3]. However, this exponent of q does not depend at all on P 1 or P 2 , so the bound r P 1 ,P 2 (F q ) ≪ P 1 ,P 2 q 1−1/24 is stronger than what can possibly hold in the integer setting when at least one of P 1 or P 2 has degree at least 25.…”