“…However, due to the generally low solar radiation and cloud liquid water content during haze (Zheng et al, 2015a;Wang et al, 2014), conventional sulfate formation via OH oxidation in the gas phase and from aqueous-phase SO 2 (referred to as S(IV) = SO 2 q H 2 O + HSO (McArdle and Hoffmann, 1983), O 3 (Hoffmann and Calvert, 1985), and O 2 via a radical chain mechanism initiated by transition metal ions (TMIs) in clouds (Ibusuki and Takeuchi, 1987;Alexander et al, 2009;Harris et al, 2013) cannot explain the observed high sulfate concentrations (Zheng et al, 2015a). To explain the observed high sulfate concentrations during haze in Beijing and the NCP, recent studies have suggested that heterogeneous reactions on/in aerosols/aerosol water are potentially important Hung and Hoffmann, 2015;Cheng et al, 2016;Wang et al, 2016Wang et al, , 2014Zheng et al, 2015a, b). In particular, Zheng et al (2015a) largely improved the underestimate of modeled sulfate concentrations in 2013 Beijing haze by using a relative-humidity-dependent uptake coefficient (γ ) of SO 2 on aerosols, without knowing the specific mechanisms of heterogeneous oxidation of SO 2 .…”